October 26, 2014
Red-Line: The Shift (Volume One)
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I chose to self-publish because it was the best route for me. After I wrote my trilogy, I began to research how best to publish it. I always assumed I'd attempt to go traditional, but I quickly realized that would be a long, uncertain road. If I published on my own, I could publish what I wanted, when I wanted and how I wanted. I could start to build a fan base now instead of later. It was a big learning curve, and more expensive, but I love it. I'm not sure now if I had the choice, if I would even do the traditional way.
I read and reread my first book several times, trying to get it as clean as possible. Then I had a few other people read it and got their feedback. Once I had that, I talked to a few editors and found one that I liked. I went through the edit process and cleaned it up even more. I also hired a book designer and came up with a great cover design. Once I had all the components together, I finally published. I went though the same process with books two and three. And after learning so much from editing all three books, I went back and did another edit on book one. I wanted it to be as good as I could get it. I don't know that it will ever be perfect, but I suppose that's true with every artist and their work.
Hi, Chantelle.
Thank you for taking a moment to consider my submission. I am looking for reviews for my book Red-Line: The Shift. I visited your website, read your bio and what you like to read.
My book is suspense/mystery with a supernatural twist. It's not the traditional werewolves, vampires, witches book though. My book focuses on an extraterrestrial community that lives on earth. It centers on a group of people with unique abilities that find themselves in a critical situation and they have to find their way out, despite their differences.
I love strong, relatable characters that pull me in and make me laugh and cry. I like to put them through the ringer and see what comes out on the other end. I think that's what draws a reader in and keeps them hooked. Great dialogue is crucial, too, along with a love story weaved in as well.
When I read your bio, I saw that you value similar traits. If you feel so inclined, I would like for you to review my book. I would value your opinion and would like to know what you think.
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Red-Line: The Shift is the first book in a sci-fi trilogy about a group of aliens living on Earth. It’s a competent, well written and interesting story, which could also be described as a romance, due to the relationship that develops between the two main characters.
On first appearance, Sarah Randolph seems to be an ordinary young lady. She works in a book store, where her well meaning co-worker Rachel attempts to encourage her to come out of her shell. When John Ramsey walks into the store one day and shows an interest in Sarah, it would seem Rachel has found the perfect opportunity to encourage her quiet friend to live a little. But all is not as it seems. There is something wrong with Sarah; she’s not been sleeping and just doesn’t feel herself. And John Ramsey claims to know why this is. After saving her from an unusual abduction, Ramsey explains that he has been assigned as her ‘protector’. It is his job to break some astounding news to her and help her through the journey she is about to embark on.
It turns out Sarah is not human. Like Ramsey, she is Eudoran. The Eudorans are peaceful extra-terrestrials who have been living on earth for generations. The first third of the book introduces the characters as well as Ramsey’s unique dilemma He is supposed to protect and aid Sarah while she goes through her ‘shift’; a physical event all Eudorans must endure in order to realize their full powers and sensitivities. However, he’s not been told the whole story. As one of only two surviving ‘red-lines’, Sarah is more unique than he realizes. Even more confusingly, the rarity of her existence threatens them all, but could also be the one thing to save them from certain death. The second third of the story deals with Sarah’s shift. Drifting in and out of consciousness, Sarah, whose life has been turned upside down by the knowledge that she is not human, has no choice but to go through the extreme physical ordeal with a group of strangers assigned to help her. As a reader, you can’t help wondering who she can trust.
The last third of the book reveals some more surprises, hints at more revelations to come in Volume Two, and sees the smoldering attraction between Ramsey and Sarah grow into something more. It also provides a dramatic climax as Sarah comes through her shift and realizes her unique powers and her responsibility to save the gray-lines. The author does well to spread the information about the Eudorans throughout the book, without dumping too much information or fact on the reader at once. The readers interest is held and the characters are believable. I particularly enjoyed the competitive nature of the relationship between Ramsey and his step-brother Declan. The sub plots and the future ones hinted at keep you turning the pages. By the end of the book we understand why Sarah is so rare and so precious to the gray lines, but we do not know exactly who she is in danger from or why. The book ends leaving enough hanging in the air to make you want to read book two, where I presume further questions will be answered and raised. The only downside for me was the omniscient third person narrative, which saw several character points of view within a chapter. I felt this caused me to feel slightly disconnected to the characters, but I am hoping they will continue to develop as individuals in the next two books. Overall, an enjoyable and unique book with the sort of extra-terrestrial story line you can imagine making a very good movie.
A competent, well written and interesting alien adventure, with a hint of romance, Red-Line: The Shift holds your interest from start to finish. Who is watching Sarah Randolph and what do they want with her? Why hasn’t she felt like herself lately, or been able to sleep? John Ramsey has the answers, or at least some of them, but can she trust him? The action starts quickly, with Sarah going through the ‘shift’ just moments after being told she is not in fact human. The story then confines us to one house and one group of characters as they aid and protect Sarah through her shift, whilst using their own unique sensitivities to divert and fight danger as it appears. Sarah is a ‘red-line’ Eudoran, possibly the last of her kind and the only hope the gray-line Eudorans have of survival…but there is another force at work, and who they are and why they want to get hold of Sarah will no doubt be revealed in Volume Two.
The Rundown
Red-Line: The Shift is the first book in a sci-fi trilogy about a group of aliens living on Earth. It’s a competent, well written and interesting story, which could also be described as a romance, due to the relationship that develops between the two main characters.
On first appearance, Sarah Randolph seems to be an ordinary young lady. She works in a book store, where her well meaning co-worker Rachel attempts to encourage her to come out of her shell. When John Ramsey walks into the store one day and shows an interest in Sarah, it would seem Rachel has found the perfect opportunity to encourage her quiet friend to live a little. But all is not as it seems. There is something wrong with Sarah; she’s not been sleeping and just doesn’t feel herself. And John Ramsey claims to know why this is. After saving her from an unusual abduction, Ramsey explains that he has been assigned as her ‘protector’. It is his job to break some astounding news to her and help her through the journey she is about to embark on.
It turns out Sarah is not human. Like Ramsey, she is Eudoran. The Eudorans are peaceful extra-terrestrials who have been living on earth for generations. The first third of the book introduces the characters as well as Ramsey’s unique dilemma He is supposed to protect and aid Sarah while she goes through her ‘shift’; a physical event all Eudorans must endure in order to realize their full powers and sensitivities. However, he’s not been told the whole story. As one of only two surviving ‘red-lines’, Sarah is more unique than he realizes. Even more confusingly, the rarity of her existence threatens them all, but could also be the one thing to save them from certain death. The second third of the story deals with Sarah’s shift. Drifting in and out of consciousness, Sarah, whose life has been turned upside down by the knowledge that she is not human, has no choice but to go through the extreme physical ordeal with a group of strangers assigned to help her. As a reader, you can’t help wondering who she can trust.
The last third of the book reveals some more surprises, hints at more revelations to come in Volume Two, and sees the smoldering attraction between Ramsey and Sarah grow into something more. It also provides a dramatic climax as Sarah comes through her shift and realizes her unique powers and her responsibility to save the gray-lines. The author does well to spread the information about the Eudorans throughout the book, without dumping too much information or fact on the reader at once. The readers interest is held and the characters are believable. I particularly enjoyed the competitive nature of the relationship between Ramsey and his step-brother Declan. The sub plots and the future ones hinted at keep you turning the pages. By the end of the book we understand why Sarah is so rare and so precious to the gray lines, but we do not know exactly who she is in danger from or why. The book ends leaving enough hanging in the air to make you want to read book two, where I presume further questions will be answered and raised. The only downside for me was the omniscient third person narrative, which saw several character points of view within a chapter. I felt this caused me to feel slightly disconnected to the characters, but I am hoping they will continue to develop as individuals in the next two books. Overall, an enjoyable and unique book with the sort of extra-terrestrial story line you can imagine making a very good movie.
The Recommendation
A competent, well written and interesting alien adventure, with a hint of romance, Red-Line: The Shift holds your interest from start to finish. Who is watching Sarah Randolph and what do they want with her? Why hasn’t she felt like herself lately, or been able to sleep? John Ramsey has the answers, or at least some of them, but can she trust him? The action starts quickly, with Sarah going through the ‘shift’ just moments after being told she is not in fact human. The story then confines us to one house and one group of characters as they aid and protect Sarah through her shift, whilst using their own unique sensitivities to divert and fight danger as it appears. Sarah is a ‘red-line’ Eudoran, possibly the last of her kind and the only hope the gray-line Eudorans have of survival…but there is another force at work, and who they are and why they want to get hold of Sarah will no doubt be revealed in Volume Two.
The Rating
4 Stars (out of 5): Recommended. For the right audience, this book is a great read. It can hold its own against any traditionally published novel in its genre.
The Pros & Cons
Pros: Humor, Plot, Prose, Steamy Romance, Strong World-BuildingCons: Character Developement, Slow in Places
Author’s Summary
Her fate…
Sarah Randolph believes she’s just an ordinary woman, at least until the day she meets Ramsey—a mysterious man who tells her that not only is she not ordinary…she’s not even human.
Depends on him…
John Sherlock Ramsey, an Earth-born Eudoran, is a Protector. He’s assigned to help Sarah complete her Shift, a period of intense transformation experienced by those of his species. But her Shift is different and risky, because she’s a Red-Line, a member of his kind not seen in over sixty years.
Yet she is the key to his survival…
As her abilities are revealed and the secrets of their destiny exposed, they must confront an assailant who shares Sarah’s unique origins and whose motives are far more sinister than anything Ramsey has ever encountered.
Will Sarah’s unique powers change their fate? Or will she prove to be Ramsey’s last assignment on earth and watch as her people succumb to extinction?
Part one of a three-part series.
Short Description
Sarah Randolph’s just learned that she’s an extraterrestrial living on earth. She’s about to Shift, but she can’t do it alone. Her transformation will reveal her true nature, but will also expose an assailant with sinister intentions. As time runs out, will Sarah’s unique gifts change her fate?
Catchphrase
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