February 18, 2018
The Dragon of Hidden Treasures
Book 1
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For my first book in 2009, I went with a hybrid publisher (one that occupied that grey area between traditional publisher and vanity press). That worked out so well, I published two more books with them. When they started charging a fee for every little service, even to keep my books 'alive' in their database, I jumped over to another publishing house, one claiming to be a 'traditional, Christian' publisher, through which I committed to two more books. That move soon became an agonizing descent into the third pit of 'author hell' (their production department was in the Philippines, for Pete's sake, and my book was being edited by people who spoke English as a second language!). They were eventually indicted on federal charges of fraud and racketeering, among other things, and I was cut lose, for a nominal $50 fee, of course. Sick of the endless 'money pit' that is mainstream publishing, I seriously considered giving up writing completely, but decided to try one last avenue: the Indie market. I went with a small Indie publishing house, Indiependence Press, and have my fingers crossed that my publishing saga will finally have a happy ending.
After I went through my manuscript with a fine tooth comb (at least a dozen times!), it was handed over to be professionally edited by a trained and certified editor with Indiependence Press.
Hi Melody! Set against the explosive backdrop of Warlord Era China, The Dragon of Hidden Treasures has everything from fast-paced action as Wang Tyan-wei and Kathryn Kidwell struggle to survive a warlord's wrath, to impossible love that would cost them everything if acted upon. I hope you enjoy the adventure!
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Kathryn Kidwell is an American living in turn of the twentieth century China because her father William’s business, Kidwell Industries is located there. Kathryn goes to college at Harvard in Boston, but returns to China and her family after graduating. When she gets off the boat in search of her father, she must avoid the advances of an overbearing man she met on the boat. In her efforts to get away from him, she collides with a Chinese peasant, Ty Wang. Though neither of them say anything, there is an instant attraction. Kathryn finds him handsome. Ty has seen her before and knows of her family through his past life, where he also went to America and learned to speak English, before he became destitute.
She forgets the interaction once she is united with her father, William, and heads home. He tells her of the recent unrest in their city of Canton. While the Kwangtung Province had been a center of foreign commerce, the Imperial system collapsed in 1911. Ever since it has seen political unrest and is governed by warlords who are constantly being overthrown.
She assumes she will help with the family business, since she just got her degree from Harvard. However, since she is female, that will not be possible and her father has made other plans. She is to marry his successor, Collin McNeal, someone she has never even met. If she wants to be a small part of the business, she will do so as Collin’s wife.
Kathryn is mortified. That night, she dreams of Ty Wang, but wakes and realizes she has no choice but to agree to her father’s plans. He gives her a sapphire and diamond engagement ring, that had been her mother’s, who is now deceased. She tries to hedge the wedding by saying she will need at least a year before marrying Collin in order to get to know him. Her father agrees and Collin is invited to dinner that evening so that the two can meet.
Lucy, a British friend of Kathryn’s, is to be married at Christmas. She comes to see Kathryn and persuades her to go into town to shop. Kathryn warns Lucy of the growing unrest and expresses concern that is may be unsafe for them to go there. Lucy says it is all nonsense and bullies Kathryn into going to town.
They shop in the market when they arrive and all seems well. Ty Wang has caught sight of Kathryn and spent the previous evening thinking about her as well. He knows she is a Kidwell and that she is wealthy, but does not know her first name. He tries to catch her first name and follows Kathryn and Lucy at a distance.
The girls stop at an outdoor vendor in the market who is selling jewelry. Kathryn is instantly intrigued by a ring shaped like a dragon, with a pearl inside. The ring symbolizes The Dragon of Hidden Treasures and the protection and myth of the dragon. Kathryn longs to buy it but Lucy thinks it is just trash and scolds her to keep her from buying it.
The girls stroll further into the city to a fabric store full of wondrous cloth. But as the girls shop, the sound of gunfire can be heard outside. The shop owner closes down and pushes the girls out into the street. They are soon caught in the crossfire of war. Kathryn does her best to get them to safety by navigating through back alleys, but soon the girls are spotted by soldiers and accosted.
General Cheng Jiong meets with them and wants to know who they are. Ty Wang is now by the general’s side as a Chinese/English translator and is revealed to be a colonel in the armed forces. Kathryn tries to speak respectfully and maneuver her way out of trouble but Lucy becomes demanding and rude. Lucy is shot dead. The general puts a gun to Kathryn’s head and is planning on shooting her. Ty intervenes and suggests that they kidnap Kathryn instead and demand money from her father, since he is rich. The general agrees and places her in Ty’s custody, since it was his idea. If it works, fine. That will mean more money for the general’s army. If the plan fails, Ty will pay with his life.
Kathryn is devastated when the general wants Ty to take her to the general’s home in the north. If that happens, her father will not know where she is and will not be able to rescue her.
Thus begins Kathryn’s journey for survival.
Those who read romantic stories full of adventure and intrigue will enjoy this story. The reader is immediately pulled in from the very first page. Excellent writing, with attention to details, that makes the characters and setting leap off the page. The characters are vivid and unique and the story feels original also. The story is also full of twists, turns and betrayals.
There were a few spots that could have used a few editing brush strokes to make the women more believable in their actions at the beginning. At times, Kathryn and her mother figure, or Amah, seemed a bit too accommodating, even for the times, and perhaps could have protested the actions of the male figures more. But this did serve to show the reality of the times and location, where women had little say in anything, including their own lives. At other times, the pace was so fast, the main characters had to solve problem after problem.
Fans of fast-paced romantic suspense, adventure stories, war dramas and the works of Amy Tan will enjoy this novel. There are disturbing images as well as scenes of graphic violence. This is also book 1 in a series, so the ending is not resolved.
The Rundown
Kathryn Kidwell is an American living in turn of the twentieth century China because her father William’s business, Kidwell Industries is located there. Kathryn goes to college at Harvard in Boston, but returns to China and her family after graduating. When she gets off the boat in search of her father, she must avoid the advances of an overbearing man she met on the boat. In her efforts to get away from him, she collides with a Chinese peasant, Ty Wang. Though neither of them say anything, there is an instant attraction. Kathryn finds him handsome. Ty has seen her before and knows of her family through his past life, where he also went to America and learned to speak English, before he became destitute.
She forgets the interaction once she is united with her father, William, and heads home. He tells her of the recent unrest in their city of Canton. While the Kwangtung Province had been a center of foreign commerce, the Imperial system collapsed in 1911. Ever since it has seen political unrest and is governed by warlords who are constantly being overthrown.
She assumes she will help with the family business, since she just got her degree from Harvard. However, since she is female, that will not be possible and her father has made other plans. She is to marry his successor, Collin McNeal, someone she has never even met. If she wants to be a small part of the business, she will do so as Collin’s wife.
Kathryn is mortified. That night, she dreams of Ty Wang, but wakes and realizes she has no choice but to agree to her father’s plans. He gives her a sapphire and diamond engagement ring, that had been her mother’s, who is now deceased. She tries to hedge the wedding by saying she will need at least a year before marrying Collin in order to get to know him. Her father agrees and Collin is invited to dinner that evening so that the two can meet.
Lucy, a British friend of Kathryn’s, is to be married at Christmas. She comes to see Kathryn and persuades her to go into town to shop. Kathryn warns Lucy of the growing unrest and expresses concern that is may be unsafe for them to go there. Lucy says it is all nonsense and bullies Kathryn into going to town.
They shop in the market when they arrive and all seems well. Ty Wang has caught sight of Kathryn and spent the previous evening thinking about her as well. He knows she is a Kidwell and that she is wealthy, but does not know her first name. He tries to catch her first name and follows Kathryn and Lucy at a distance.
The girls stop at an outdoor vendor in the market who is selling jewelry. Kathryn is instantly intrigued by a ring shaped like a dragon, with a pearl inside. The ring symbolizes The Dragon of Hidden Treasures and the protection and myth of the dragon. Kathryn longs to buy it but Lucy thinks it is just trash and scolds her to keep her from buying it.
The girls stroll further into the city to a fabric store full of wondrous cloth. But as the girls shop, the sound of gunfire can be heard outside. The shop owner closes down and pushes the girls out into the street. They are soon caught in the crossfire of war. Kathryn does her best to get them to safety by navigating through back alleys, but soon the girls are spotted by soldiers and accosted.
General Cheng Jiong meets with them and wants to know who they are. Ty Wang is now by the general’s side as a Chinese/English translator and is revealed to be a colonel in the armed forces. Kathryn tries to speak respectfully and maneuver her way out of trouble but Lucy becomes demanding and rude. Lucy is shot dead. The general puts a gun to Kathryn’s head and is planning on shooting her. Ty intervenes and suggests that they kidnap Kathryn instead and demand money from her father, since he is rich. The general agrees and places her in Ty’s custody, since it was his idea. If it works, fine. That will mean more money for the general’s army. If the plan fails, Ty will pay with his life.
Kathryn is devastated when the general wants Ty to take her to the general’s home in the north. If that happens, her father will not know where she is and will not be able to rescue her.
Thus begins Kathryn’s journey for survival.
The Recommendation
Those who read romantic stories full of adventure and intrigue will enjoy this story. The reader is immediately pulled in from the very first page. Excellent writing, with attention to details, that makes the characters and setting leap off the page. The characters are vivid and unique and the story feels original also. The story is also full of twists, turns and betrayals.
There were a few spots that could have used a few editing brush strokes to make the women more believable in their actions at the beginning. At times, Kathryn and her mother figure, or Amah, seemed a bit too accommodating, even for the times, and perhaps could have protested the actions of the male figures more. But this did serve to show the reality of the times and location, where women had little say in anything, including their own lives. At other times, the pace was so fast, the main characters had to solve problem after problem.
Fans of fast-paced romantic suspense, adventure stories, war dramas and the works of Amy Tan will enjoy this novel. There are disturbing images as well as scenes of graphic violence. This is also book 1 in a series, so the ending is not resolved.
The Rating
Top Pick! 5 Stars (out of five): Freaking amazing. Any agent or publishing house that passed this one up made a big mistake. It was selected by our reviewer as a personal favorite. This is also a nomination for our Novel of the Year award.
The Pros & Cons
Pros: Believable, Characterization, Page Turner, Plot, Strong World-BuildingCons: Extreme Violence
The Comparisons
For readers who liked these books and authors: Amy Tan novels, JOY LUCK CLUBAuthor’s Summary
China, 1923: In an ancient land battling for its very existence, violence and chaos reign supreme. Amidst the devastating aftermath of a revolution that toppled the divine Imperial system and left the once glorious Empire torn and bleeding, ruthless warlords have claimed dominion. Political intrigue and betrayal are the only rulers now.
In the wrong place at the wrong time, Kathryn Kidwell is captured during an invasion of Canton by the warlord, Cheng Jiong. Recognizing the folly of allowing the only daughter of a powerful American trade lord to be cold-bloodedly murdered, Ty Wang must make an impossible choice: to save Kathryn will cost him his life, but to let her die could mean the death of his beloved homeland.
The Dragon of Hidden Treasures, Book 1 is the first chapter in the electrifying tale of Ty and Kathryn’s desperate struggle to stay alive and stop a war that would blow China to pieces. Bound together by a love as strong as it is forbidden, their efforts could ultimately change the fate of a nation…and destroy them both.
Short Description
Attracted to the exotic mystery of Warlord Era China? Relish forbidden love in the midst of revolution? Adore political intrigue and heroes/heroines overcoming impossible odds to survive only to be betrayed by someone close and trusted? Then you’ll love The Dragon Of Hidden Treasures, Book 1!
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